12345, ну вы поняли

[Jmur]

you were the one who understood me
when i told i'm feeling lonely
And that's why i feel thankful, but
today you r the one who needs to die
dont worry
i'll clear up the mess left by your life

if you dont wanna play my game
then everyday i will say the same:
dude, you were never meant to fly
dont worry
i'll clear up the mess left by your life

апд:
eveyone was so amused
but noone wanted be seduced
your party lives its own life
it's now apart from what we've done
dont worry
i'll clear up the mess left by your life

we've been away from everywhere
we're now okay we're now aware
of what we've done and left behind
dont worry
someone clears up the mess left by our lives

бро, с тебя проверить орфографию XDDD

запись создана: 14.05.2012 в 15:08

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может, все-таки грамматику? Х))
now it's apart from what we've done
but noone wanted to be seduced

[Jmur]

ту там лишнее, оно по ритму не укладывается =/
думаю, лучше тогда but noone wants to be seduced, тогда можно оставить х) но смысл теряется =/
я тоже над этим долго думала, но блииин, ритм жеж

+"it’s now approaching midnight" можно же им говорить DD

а грамматику тебе проверять - это уже даже без вопросов xDDD